Thursday, June 16, 2005

Suggest a Title..

Dukh iis baat ka nahi ke jiss sadak pae hum chalae uspae sirf kaante milae;
gham too iss baat ka hai ke kaantae hamarae apnon ne bichayae.

Dukh iis baat ka nahi ke kaantae hamarae pair mein chubhae;
gham too iis baat ka hai ke nishan hamarae dil pae ubharae.

Dukh iis baat ka nahi ke aasuu hamarae dil ne royae;
gham too iis baat ka hai ke wo boondae kisi nae bhi na dekhae.

Dukh iis baat ka nahi ke unhsae hamae baewafai mili;
gham too iis baat ka hai ke pahilae humae wafa kyu mili?

Dukh iis baat ka nahi ke hum hamaesha hee akaelae thae;
gham too iis baat ka hai ke ab tak hum kitnae anjaan thae!

C'mon its not by me... its by Rakesh,
for a acquaintance!!!!
But its touching to me.. and very close to my heart !!!!

Heres what Puno has to say...

"Rulanne se pehle ek baar hasya toh hota
kasoor kya tha iss dil ko bataya toh hota
mili saja uss khata ki jo ki na hamnein
kash hamne tumse dil lagaya na hota"

6 comments:

Phoenix said...

Dukh iss baat ka nahi ki hamare aansu hasi mein chhupe rahe doston se hamesha

gham to iss baat ka hai ki aj woh ek dost ke labzon mein nazar aa gaye

The Boka said...

good one!

adarsh said...
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adarsh said...

good one yar.... till now i really dont know how do ppl right poetry.. i know that it cant be taught by some one.. its a god given gift..njoy..

Ada said...

How about naming it "FARIYAAD"

Aksar ye fariyaad hi to hoti hain jo dil se nikalti hain
dil tak jati hain
dil ko chhuti hain

haan magar........
koi insaaf nahi hota

fariyaad sun ne wala
do aansoo hi baha deta hain

apni majboori ko bin kahe bata deta hain

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