Monday, January 09, 2006

Safar ...

zindagi ke safar me chaar pal ka saath tha...
yaad nahi ab, jahan tumse mila woh kaunsa mod tha !!

raahe badal gayi.. humsafar bhi naye mile..
tum jaisa koi nahi, jahan dil se dil mile...
umeed pe ye safar tayy karr raha hoon...
kahin kisi mod pe fir se wohi humsafar mile !!

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~ Samyak.

25 comments:

Athena said...

nice one :))) kiske yaad main khoye hue ho jo aisi achchi shaayari likh rahe ho ;))):PP

Siege Perilous said...

bass, aise hi kuch sooz gaya to leekh daala. Kisiki yaad aana jaroori hai kya?

Athena said...

ab composer tum ho toh tumhi jaano :PPPP

arpz said...

sahi hain .. bhaari bharkam

Siege Perilous said...

Thnx Arpz !!

Athena, kisi ki yaad me to leekha hai, but its all imaginative !! [:)]

Megha said...

hmmmm humsafar toh hote hi safar ka sath dene ke liye ek na ek din unhe jana hi hain .....yeh raaste humein khud hi tay karne hain



nice one sam :)

Siege Perilous said...

Megs, aisa bhi ho sakataa hai ki dono ke raaste ek hi ho, manzil ek ho !!

kosha said...

cool one :-)

kosha said...

aajkal kaafi acha likhne lage ho :-P

Siege Perilous said...

Haan.. inspiration hi kuch aise mil rahi hai ki dil leekhane pe majboor ho raha hai [;)]

kosha said...

oh ho...
humein bhi batao inspiration...shaayad hum bhi acha likhne ke liye inspire ho jaayein ;-)

Siege Perilous said...

are zindagi hai na sabse badi inspiration !!
Usine ye sab leekhawaya hai, bass Alphaaz mere hai, kahani zindagi ki !! [;)]
--
Aaj yahan kaise aana hua?? [:O]

kosha said...

hmmm...
but mujhe toh zindagi aise nahin inspire karti ;-)

raasta bhatak gayee hoon actually :-P

Siege Perilous said...

har koi raasta bhatakataa hai, tabhi to nayi raahe, naye log milate hai.

and zindgi tumhe bhi inspire karati hai, bass tum abhi use mahsoos nahi karr paa rahi ho.

....R.A.J.A.... said...

woh nahin milegi, kyun bekaar mein ro raha hai? :-p

btw, wonderful post :-)

Siege Perilous said...

are Raja, dost hai ki dushmann...
woh milegi... woh na sahi to koi aur milegi !!

Megha said...

agar asa hain bhi toh bhi raaste par toh humein khud hi chalna hain

Siege Perilous said...

haan raaste pe khood hi chalana hota hai, but we need a companion always with us. May it be a frend/lover/family. At some point of time, we keep moving ahead but humsafar to chaahiye hi na !! [:)]

Megha said...

ek had toh thik hain
but humsafar humesa sath toh nahi dete

Siege Perilous said...

sahi bola !!
tabhi to nayee raaahe.. naye humsafar !!
move on !!

....R.A.J.A.... said...

koi aur mil bhi sakti hai, Sam, par woh nahin milegi. woh meri hai :-p

Siege Perilous said...

sab apni jagah sahi hai, sabko lagataa hai ki woh apni hai. But woh hai hi nahi kisi ki !! [;)]

Megha said...

i can this much

humsafar ke bina bhi chala jaa sakta hain
humdum ke bina jiya jaa sakta hain
yeh baat aur hain
inka sath zindagi ko aasan bana deta hain

Siege Perilous said...

This is just marvellous !!
add this and lines from Vins comments to ur blog so tht all ppl can read it there :)
U Rocking these days :))

Megha said...

thnks to ur and vins post jo mein asa likh payi :)